Open Sesame

So here is the next cut of my Creative Sample. Any and all comments are welcomed and appreciated.

Also, here's a link to a better quality version.

https://vimeo.com/59959729

From Film

So this is a VERY rough cut of my video I'm making for my application. There are no transitions yet and it's still 15 seconds too long. I'd just like a little bit of feedback on what you think and how you think I could improve it thus far. 

IN CASUS PERGIT